Essay Help

I just deleted the essay I spent days working on for MIT. I realized that I shouldn’t stop myself from saying what I really wanted to because it may have been “too personal.” But, I’m not sure if my essay is really on topic, and if in fact it is “too personal” that it could be a horrible mistake to go this route. I don’t want to post it here, so can someone please PM me if you want to help me. I will send them my essay (it’s about 550 words). Please help! Thanks.

<p>I'll look at it if you want.</p>