Essay!!!horray hurrah!!!!critique me please!

<p>Anyone interested...????? just comment here and I'll pm it to you!!! thank you!!!</p>

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<p>I might wanna try. PM me.</p>

<p>PM me, id like to read</p>

<p>I will love to have a look at it as well!</p>

<p>anyone else? it would be much appreciated</p>