Essay (HYPS and more)

<p>Hello, </p>

<p>I've already submitted my SCEA app to Harvard, but I'm frustrated with my Common App essay.</p>

<p>Would anyone (that's not applying this year, of course!) be willing to have a look at my essay? I think it's pretty interesting, but I'd like a few more opinions before I send it out to more schools. I have the usual stats and ECs, but my essays are probably going to have to be pretty strong if I'm going to have any chance at all. </p>

<p>I'll PM my essay if you're interested. Thanks! </p>

<p>Why is the Harvard forum the catchall for every random question, esp Ivy question? Go find the College Essay forum.</p>

<p>sorry, i’m new to this board. </p>

<p>can anyone else help me please? </p>

<p>I’ll take a look</p>

<p>I’d love to help you too :)</p>

<p>For your reference, here is the essay forum where students trade essays and ask questions.
<a href=“College Essays - College Confidential Forums”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;