Essay? More like Es-gay! In other words, Common app essay in rough condition!

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<p>Okay, if you could not tell by my title, this is my common application in about the roughest state it has been. I think this draft, of the 4, is probably the best, but needs MAJOR grammatical corrections and imput on my wording. I am a very verbose man, using peotry and writting as one of my artisitic outlets. So, I need a bit of aid from all you fine CCers. Just PM if you want to help me out.</p>

<p>Also, word of caution, my essay is about coming out, so if you are either too offended by the thought of the LGBTQ community or go in thinking my essay will be just a cliche concept, please don't ask to read it. Thanks!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a peek. xD I’m sure it’s not that bad. Being verbose is not a bad quality, especially if what you write reveals a great deal about you and your personality. =)</p>

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<p>PM with title/prompt</p>

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<p>I’ll give feedback, PM me!</p>

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<p>I’d definitely read it if you send it to me. That’s such a bold topic though!</p>

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<p>My original draft was 1400 words and I had to tighten it like crazy. PM it over</p>