ESSAY on a risky/taboo topic

College Essays
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<p>I just finished my common app essay, and the topic is on an experience i had that will make me stand out (i mean it), but i think it's a bit risky since it may come off as if i'm trying to elicit pity of some sort.</p>

<p>But anyway, despite not having edited it much yet, I think it's pretty good so far. I probably won't be able to have any of my english teachers critique it, so I'd love your comments.</p>

<p>I'll PM it to those who are interested so please only comment if you plan to RESPOND. Preferably college students/parents/teachers, but all are welcome. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I can give you some feedback on it, if you'd like!</p>

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<p>PM it to me - I'll respond as fast as I can.</p>

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<p>sure! pm it</p>

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<p>I can take a look if you stil need</p>

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<p>I'll read it. PM it over.</p>

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<p>I'll read it, if you'd like. I'm only in high school, however.</p>

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<p>I would be happy to read it!</p>

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<p>Ill read it also.</p>

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<p>Risky is good. Go ahead and PM it to me and I'll let you know what I think.</p>

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<p>Post this on one of the college forums or the parent forum for their opinions.</p>

<p>Good luck.</p>

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<p>i will read it. <a href="mailto:tyac.sg@gmail.com">tyac.sg@gmail.com</a></p>