<p>I'll PM it to you if you want to read it. It's only a rough draft and way over the word limit.</p>
<p>sure ill take a look, just pm me.</p>
<p>sure I’d be glad to</p>
<p>I’ll take a look.</p>
<p>I’ll critique it for ya, i actually went to africa to haha, which part did you go to? pm it over.</p>
<p>sure ill check it out</p>