If anyone would like to review this draft I just made that would be great! Also please post your credentials, like student or any experience related to this. Thanks!
Here- I didn’t read this yet because I want to say what I have to say quickly- take the draft off of here and send it to people via PM. The risk of people stealing your essay is too high.
Take a look at the post/comment history of people that you send it too, too. If it looks like they’re lookin for an essay, think twice about sending it. I would love to read/critique your draft and will do so in a moment and send comments via PM. Now, full disclosure, I’m applying to colleges in the fall as well. I’ve got no interest in taking your essay, but other people might! Be careful with drafts on the internet.
oh thanks haha
You want an adult with an established posting history.