<p>for CAS,which part of the essay should i discuss more???intellectual interests or how i will utilize the academic programs in CAS to futher explor my interests? The max is 500 words........I wrote like 700 words, i need to delete some parts..Should the essay be descriptive???</p>
<p>You should find a balance between the two elements. I don't understand what you mean by descriptive. You should certainly use a lot of adjectives, but not colloquialism, such as "my life will be _______ at Cornell..." etc... That's kind of sick. LOL</p>
<p>To Shifu Yoda </p>
<p>I wanna make it more descriptive like more adjectives, but my essay already has 700 words..I dunno what should i cut off from the essay...
Balance..[utilize the academic programs in CAS to futher explor my interests]..I dont really know how to write it..talking about the programs in CAS or the way i will study in CAS??</p>