<p>To get a 10+ on your essay, do you need different types of examples? Because i focused specifically on scientific discoveries in the twentieth century-Manhattan Project, Watson and Crick.</p>
<p>It doesn't matter how many examples or what types of examples you gave. What matters more is how you wrote it.</p>
<p>I used Watson and Crick too lol.</p>
<p>My explanations were ok, not really specific. I just said the focused on experimentation etc. and it yielded great result, i.e. DNA discovery.</p>
<p>I have a question.
dont you think the essay readers will get tired of hearing the same examples by all the students?</p>
<p>Who knows... I talked about discovering faith. I'll probably end up with some grader that hates all religions.</p>
<p>I thought my examples were unique. I figured alot of people would disagree and talked about the discovery of America, so I thought I was bucking the trend a bit.</p>
<p>i used manhattan project and francis and crick....that is crazy how we used the same examples.</p>
<p>shucks i should have talked about the discovery of America.</p>
<p>i wrote about "The Invisible Man"
and somehow the only thing that came to my mind was drunk driving. and it didn't really fit under the category of "personal experience" either because i used the words "hypothetically speaking"</p>
<p>SIGH. and i thought i would get a 10+ too..</p>