Essay Reader? Need a few to help revise/edit!

<p>Just started writing a new common app essay that I will be sending into some top schools.
Would be nice if you could help critique/edit/revise for me!
This essay is a work in progress and I just spilt most of my ideas on this paper and was going to work from there.
Thanks!</p>

<p>I know its late, but any help would be appreciated!</p>

<p>You can send it over if you are willing to critique my common application as well. Thanks a lot.</p>

<p>sure thing.</p>

<p>I can read yours if you read minee</p>

<p>by the way I’m in basically the same boat as you as far as just spilling an idea onto paper, but I’m not really applying to the conventional “top schools” so I doubt we have schools in common</p>

<p>Its alright, this is a general common app essay.</p>