Essay review please? :)

<p>Would anyone like to review any/all of my three essays? Advice and harsh, relentless criticism would all be much appreciated :)
NO CURRENT APPLICANTS PLEASE.</p>

<p>sure, PM me </p>

<p>(accepted EA) Class of 2014!</p>

<p>send me thorugh personal message. I’m not applying to Stanford.</p>

<p>Sure. PM me.</p>

<p>Matriculating '14</p>