<p>I'm applying to some fairly competitive schools, and would love some third party feedback on my CommonApp essay. Thanks! :)</p>
<p>I can read it. Send it over :)</p>
<p>i'll critique it for ya, pm it over. :) maybe wanna read mine as well?</p>
<p>I'll read it. just pm it! :)</p>
<p>sure, pm me!</p>
<p>sure --> pm me!</p>