I recently applied to fit for the AMC program (fall 2019) and just wanted some feedback on my essay. I have a gpa of 3.7 what are my chances of getting in?
“Destiny is determined by the choices you make, choose now and choose well” and I feel this quote describes perfectly my outlook on the future.
Born and raised in Burlington, North Carolina, I have always felt there were limitations of self expression and creativity in such a small town environment. It seems many of my classmates are attending college close to home, however, I have always seen myself breaking the mold and expanding my horizons. I cannot think of anywhere better to do that than FIT. While thinking of my destiny and how I envision myself in the future, I see a strong independent woman who has flourished because of the choices SHE made. I believe attending FIT will be a essential part of achieving my vision for myself to become the person I am destined to be.
Diversity is what I seek and FIT’s AMC program is the perfect choice for me. I will work diligently to excel as an FIT student because I believe success includes applying creativity with a strong work ethic. I have always been able to use creativity and exuberance when problem solving and accomplishing my goals, not only in academics, but also in life.
At the age of 10, I spent a lot of time looking at my Mom’s Vanity Fair collection. Although I could not articulate it at the time, I understood the conceptual underlying ideas of the ad campaigns. I was fascinated and inspired and began to create my own magazines by collaging the most interesting and unique images which developed my artistic self expression.
As a high school student, I participated in clubs such as the Interact Club (promoting volunteerism), Go Green (environmentally focused), Kids for Wish Kids (Make a Wish Foundation) and FCCLA (Family Career Community Leaders of America). By participating in these clubs, I learned how to brainstorm ideas and bring concepts to fruition in a team environment. I applied what I learned and formed my own club called Paws for Life dedicated to fundraising and volunteering for local animal shelters. I developed a mission statement, worked with the school administration, designed posters and digital flyers to publicize the club.
To be able to turn your passions into a venture that serves others, as well as being profitable is ideal. This concept fostered my first entrepreneurial project, a personalized thrift-shop. Thrift shopping is a favorite pastime and I often find distinctive and unique items. I began buying and displaying my finds in a spare bedroom at home. As my collection grew, more and more of my friends, and even some girls I didn’t know that well, would come by to be personally styled. Having satisfied “customers” gave me a great sense of accomplishment.
I am proud of my dedication towards academics and learning and truly believe that education in is important and should be a thoughtful part of everyday life. Working hard is important to me and I have been successful in my after school jobs. I have worked as a restaurant hostess and had a managerial position at at yogurt shop after school where I learned to work with the public and be an outward-facing representative of my employers and their organizations…
The environment and mentoring offered at FIT, combined with the ideals and standard of excellence it represents, is what I have always longed for in a college experience. I will work passionately in achieving my goal of getting a degree in Advertising Marketing and Communications from FIT. I am dedicated to being an exemplary representative of the high standards for which FIT is widely known, as a student and throughout my future career endeavors.