<p>i was wondering if you guys could review over my essay and tell me how it goes.
my grammar was never good and need you guys to help me.
my essay is suppose to answer UF topic of describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college experience or your contribution to the UF campus community. You may want to reflect on your family, your school or community activities, or your involvement in areas outside of school. </p>
<p>thnx all reviews will be appreciated</p>
<p>Technology has always amazed me even till now. I always saw technology as a boundless field; its potential hurdling society only forward in time. Everything about it amazes from the silicon chips to programing. I have also learned that those with technological skills are revered highly in society; job fields always demanding and wanting fresh new minds. Technology, itself, helps open a new realm in reality where the impossible becomes the possible. Handicapped people are able to accomplish tasks like regaining lost hearing, sight, and even movement. People are able to communicate over long distances that were once physically impossible. Medicines benefit as it reaps rewards as technology even allows people to live longer and even put a stopper to death. I believe that technology is the true magic.
I remember the day I realized what my life was meant for. I remember talking to my counselor in eighth grade questioning what field I should pursue. As she asked what activity that gives me enjoyment I replied back with nostalgic memories of my childhood. During my young youth I remember the day I first broke, or dissected, my electronic toy robot apart. I awed at the circuit boards, different coloring wires, bulbs, chips, and other electronic devices inhabiting the robot. Although I was unable to comprehend the functions of the components and it looked alien to me, it was my curiosity that wanted me to dwell in this subject for year. It was that day I witnessed the product of technology, and after my nostalgic trip I remember my reply to the counselor, "I want to be an engineer."
I want to join an education institute that has a strong
engineering department and help me strive for educaton.Although I am unaware of which field in engineering to major in, I know that whatever I field I choose I will work hard and promise to be prosperous. My insatiable thirst for knowledge and wisdom has led me to work hard in school. It's because of this reason that I have always taken the most challenging courses, and my grades have been a byproduct of my drive for knowledge. Academically my interest has been with math and science, and with my curiosity I strive hard to reach my potential.With my passion to be an engineer, I wish to join University of Florida and wish to join the ranks as the vanguards of the future.</p>
<p>i know there are some grammar errors and the logic/structure kinda fails...so yea can you guyz help me out :)</p>