essay second draft: feedback wanted!

Colleges and Universities A-Z Yale University
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<p>hi all. i just spent a long three hours pouring over my essay. I think it has come a long way, and I would GREATLY appreciate any feedback at all. If you're interested in reading it, just respond to this post and I will PM it to you right away. Just FYI, it is one of the two essays I plan on submitting with my early application to yale.</p>

<p>thanks in advance.</p>

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<p>i`ll take a look at it =)</p>

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<p>sent, thanks!</p>

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<p>ill look, too</p>

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<p>yep same i wouldnt mind looking at it</p>

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<p>I'll be happy to give you comments.</p>

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<p>it's good. your pm box is full</p>

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<p>how do you send/receive files on this site? let me know and i'd be happy to read it</p>

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<p>i can take a look at it...</p>

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<p>I would be happy to read your essay if you still need!</p>

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<p>I'd like to look at it too!</p>

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<p>i will read! i love college essays believe it or not.</p>

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<p>I'll read it!</p>

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<p>I'll read it as well : )</p>

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<p>If you still need someone to read it i will</p>

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<p>I'd love to read it if you need help. Pm me :)</p>

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<p>PM me please !</p>

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<p>ill read it 2</p>

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<p>sure whats it about?</p>

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<p>Good luck with Yale!</p>

<p>I'd like to read your essay!! :).</p>