essay second draft: feedback wanted!

Colleges and Universities A-Z Yale University
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<p>Same here, I'd like to read it!</p>

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<p>i'll read it!</p>

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<p>I'll read it too...be sure to put Yale at the top so I can differentiate it from teh other essays I receive</p>

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<p>hey,</p>

<p>I could take a look at it too.</p>

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<p>i will read it.</p>