<p>I just finished the second draft of my essay and I would GREATLY APPRECIATE any feedback!!!! I am applying early action to Yale and to about 8 other schools regular decision. My essay is a little long but I don't know what to cut out and even if the subject is good enough. Please help! Thanks so much! If you would like to read it, I will PM it to you as soon as possible.</p>
<p>I'd like to read it - PM it to me!</p>
<p>thanks a lot!</p>