<p>Which structure for the columbia essay do you think would fare better? </p>
<p>A seemingly abstract, witty work that more reflects your character as opposed to your accomplishments. (Creative theme-> i.e Talking about your garbage)</p>
<p>OR</p>
<p>A well-written conventional/straightforward piece that something goes along the lines of ... I'm very interested in <strong><em>, I've done _</em></strong><em>, and I hope to continue _</em>_ through Columbia's extraordinary resources. </p>
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<p>I think in the case of the latter, its a more straightforward representation of your accomplishments (I won so-and-so), what you've done (i.e. I pursued my interest in Biology by doing research @ Columbia), and why I want to go to Columbia.</p>
<p>In the case of the former, (creative), I think I can present myself more creatively. But as a downside, it'll be much harder and basically not possible to talk directly about my accomplishments. But the creative structure probably reflects me as a funny, strong character.</p>
<p>the verdict?</p>
<p>ANd would you guys suggest sending in a supplemental Resume? It's really hard to talk about my most involved EC (that I've literally spent 1000+ hours in) in about 225 characters which is what the online app limits you to.</p>
<p>I believe the Columbia app states several times that they do not want any supplemental resumes. You can probably just elaborate on stuff during an interview.</p>
<p>And yeah, I would def go with the creative one.
Don't talk about many of your accomplishments and activites in one essay.</p>
<p>I started writing one a few days ago, and it starts very abstract, and will become more focused on myself and how certain things have shaped me towards the end... No mention of any prizes I've won, just who I am as a person.</p>
<p>Yes; please don't catalogue your awards and such in the essay. The essay is meant to showcase yourself as an individual, and doing such makes you come off as...someone who likes to show off by cataloguing awards.</p>
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<p>u seem quite full of yourself and i know it'll be hard to keep from patting yourself on the back in your essay but u must try.</p>