Essay! Tell Me What You Think

College Essays
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<p>I've basically been slaving over this essay for hours (I started it a few weeks ago, left it alone, and then had an overwhelming urge to tear it apart with revisions). Anyways, I think it's pretty well-dialed, but I'd like to get some other opinions (and I love to get constructive criticism!). If you'd like to check it out, just say so, and I'll PM you. Thanks!</p>

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<p>hey i'm up right now I could read it and get back to you quickly if you want</p>

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<p>pm me if you need some help editing it</p>

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<p>I'll have a go at it.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look</p>

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<p>i'll read it!</p>

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<p>i'll also take a look if you want</p>

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<p>ill take a look at it 4 you.</p>

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<p>I'll read it!! PM me!</p>

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<p>i'll read it, pm me</p>

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<p>Boy, these posts are so awkward and redundant.</p>

<p>But yeah, count me in if you'd still like further input.</p>

<p>EDIT - Sorry if that came out the wrong way; by "these posts" I meant our replies, not the OP!</p>

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<p>I'll take a look. PM me.</p>

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<p>ill read it. pm it over</p>

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<p>i'll take a look at your essay. PM me and i'll tell you what i think.</p>

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<p>i'd love to read it.</p>

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<p>I'll read it! :)
PM if you're interested.</p>

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<p>send it..:)</p>

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<p>i'd love to read it!</p>

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<p>PM it to me if you want some constructive criticism.</p>

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<p>I'm bored I'd be happy to read it! PM me!</p>