Essay that I'm using for UPenn ED - anyone interested?

College Essays
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<p>Please post here and I will PM you the essay. I really want some constructive criticism. </p>

<p>I'm planning on using it for UPenn ED. I might use it for Hopkins and Georgetown RD.</p>

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<p>I’ll will read it.</p>

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<p>I will read it.</p>

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<p>PM it over.</p>

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<p>Ooo I would love to read it!</p>

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<p>I’m down, i’ll give it a read</p>

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<p>I wanna read.</p>

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<p>PM it to me…i’ll read it.</p>

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<p>Pm me if u wanna live.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>Send it over.</p>

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<p>ill check it out</p>

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<p>Hm… I’ll give it some insights</p>

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<p>well, if the others haven’t chewed it to bits by now, I’ll take a look as well :)</p>

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<p>i’ll read it too.</p>

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<p>Ok I sent it to you guys!</p>

<p>I’ve only received one comment though! :(</p>

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<p>I’d like to read.</p>

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<p>I would like to read it</p>

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<p>I’ll give you some feedback.</p>

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<p>i would like to read it as well :)</p>