Essay that I'm using for UPenn ED - anyone interested?

College Essays
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<p>I’ll give feedback</p>

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<p>I’ll read your essay!</p>

<p>Are you applying to wharton?</p>

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<p>pm me, il read it.</p>

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<p>PM me…I’ll help you.</p>

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<p>sure, pm it over.</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it and give you some constructive criticism. PM me</p>

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<p>pm it over. i hope to give you good feeback.</p>

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<p>i’ll give it a read and a few comments. pm me</p>

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<p>i’d love to read it and try to give suggestions if i can.</p>

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<p>im interested, PM me =)</p>

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<p>i would love to read it</p>

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<p>I would love to offer some feedback</p>

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<p>sure, i will read it and offer my insight</p>

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<p>i love reading essays; i’ll try to help! pm me :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you pm it to me</p>

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<p>I would love to look it over. Please PM me and I’ll comment back.</p>

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<p>Ohh, I’ll read :)</p>

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<p>PM it to me plz.I will comment.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it =)</p>

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<p>PM me. i don’t mind</p>