I was thinking about writing about how being a twin is part of my identity, how it makes me strive to be unique but also how it helps me work well with other people since I’ve always been part of a ‘team’. Any advice or suggestions would be great!
Thanks!
This sounds fine, but instead of listing off the vague character traits that being a twin has brought you, it’s better to pick a specific story/instance in your life to craft your essay around that shows (rather than tells) these traits.
As sophie9999 said, it can be an amazing essay if you show instead of telling. If you just state facts instead of writing a story, it won’t be that outstanding and interesting.