<p>I wrote my essay about my German Democratic Republic-made banjo... Even though I submitted my application already, I want to know if its good enough. I still have a few schools I haven't applied to yet. Is there anyone that can look through it for me?</p>
<p>I can’t read it (applying this year), but the topic sounds fine. It’s a matter of what you actually wrote about that matters. Did you just write about how it took you years to master the banjo and how you grew from it. OR did you write something interesting? Perhaps a story where the banjo plays some kind of a large role. Personally, I’d go for the more creative, interesting option.</p>
<p>I wrote about how instruments can become your friends and how my banjo is a close friend to me because, unlike my other instruments, he was not bought in pristine condition. I imply that his imperfections make him my favorite among all my intstruments.</p>