<p>which topic do you think would be a better choice for me to write about?</p>
<p>Losing weight- I feel that from this essay the colleges would see me as diligent and I guess persevering? Maybe it'll show them I'm patient and willing.</p>
<p>Mom- We went through some really tough times together. The essay is going to be really personal too. From this essay it'll show the colleges how I've matured and grown.</p>
<p>so which one?!</p>