<p>Is anyone willing to read my common app essay and tell me what to do to fix it, please? I'll read yours too if you'd like. PM only. </p>
<p>bump</p>
<p>I can 
i’m not super good at critiquing but i can try my best! and will send mine too!</p>
<p>Bump! I need a few more people! Please!!!</p>
<p>I could send you mine and I’ll try to critique yours too!</p>
<p>I’ll read it and give suggestions. </p>
<p>Anyone else?</p>
<p>Meeeee!!! And can I please send people mine too?</p>
<p>I would love to trade!</p>
<p>I’ll do it, PM’ing some of you guys right now :)</p>
<p>bump</p>
<p>I’ll read it. :)</p>