<p>Hey, i wrote an essay for my common app and the essay doesnt have a "topic"- what i mean is it doesnt have a clear focus...
For example, its not an essay that goes "i did this- and from this i learned that ..." or "i conquered my difficulties and hardships..."
Simply put, i just wrote about what i thought of. I've asked ppl to read it, and some teachers and friends go: "I can see what kind of person u are. Great."
On the other hand, some go ".......what are you saying? what's you're point?"
I've already submitted it for my early app. but im thinking maybe i should change it or write a new essay for my regulars. Does anybody have advice for me? And anybody have the time to read my "not focused" essay? Let me know. Thanks :)</p>