Essay..would someone read? and comment?

<p>I have written a college essay and was wondering if anyone would like to read it and maybe make comments (they don't have to be specific).</p>

<p>If you do read it please comment on the following:</p>

<p>1) Is it a good subject, I picked it because it seperated me from the crowd.</p>

<p>2)Does it describe me as a person?</p>

<p>PS: it can be no more than 500 words!</p>

<p>i'll take a look. pm me</p>

<p>i'll read it :)</p>