<p>I posted an old essay a little while ago, but have since changed it pretty radically. Would anyone mind taking a look and writing serious comments? Message me, and I'll send it over. </p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>i have some free time on me hands..........so you can pm me.</p>
<p>I hate to bump but really want opinions...anyone else? It's a good essay, but I really need opinions.</p>
<p>Oh yea, and be brutal - I'd rather take criticism then praise, at least I know you're being honest :).</p>
<p>I love essays! Especially other peoples' :)</p>
<p>ill read it</p>
<p>i'll read it if you PM me and then i'll reply as soon as possible</p>