Essay

<p>Here is an essay on a topic from sparknotes, I completed in like 23 minutes. I am not sure it is even good enough to earn 3, however I<code>d like to hear some comments on it. I</code>m taking the December sat and i`m trying to improve my skills. This is the 3rd essay i have written so far. Any comments will be greatly appreciated.

                  Imagination Is More Important Than Knowledge

  Vivid imagination has always been crucial to the human progress. Knowledge is important but imagination is the thing that ensures the progress. 
  In contemporary world millions of people complete their higher education every year. Undoubtedly, they all have knowledges in the sphere they are educated, and many of them are probably very well informed in many other fields but this doesn`t mean they change the world in any way. Most of those people just find jobs after they graduate, work, make money and live well. This is good but it just doesn`t  make them great people. It makes them average people with average lifes and average standard. One day they die and the story is over.
 On the other hand, the greatest inventors and artists were always people of great imagination.  Let`s take for example Mendel. He was a priest and lived in a remote church. He was definitely not the most educated person of his time. He just sawed his pea seeds and carefully recorded what came of them. It might seem like a weird way to waste time to the "busy" people of knowledge who are always working, however, his imagination helped him start a new field in the Biology, and he never even strived to do that.  And there are many more examples in this principle in science. It is not the knowledgeable who do the important thing, but the people with great imagination.
  Imagination is a crucial point in the arts. For example Vinsent Van Gogh. He started drawing at  the age of 25. He never had a formal training in the field but became a great artist. He started drawing while he was living in a coal-miners` village. He was very ill when he first started to make some sketches. Later on he found out that drawing is what he really wants to do in life and little by little started to improve his techniques. He imagined what it should be like and just did it. At the later periods of his life he became so eccentric that he cut his ear. Vincent Van Gogh is the perfect example of a person with imagination and no formal training in his field. However the lack of knowledge didn`t stump him, on the contrary- it made him find out for himself what he needed to know and thus allowed him to become one of the worlds greatest artists. 
   Knowledges are important in life and they can make us better people but it is the imagination that really makes the world different.

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<p>hey... ur essay isnt as bad as u think it is.. my opinion ull get a 7 or 8 out of 12 on the SAT.Why havent u dividen them into proper paragraphs??.. ur examples are well thought... though what u cud do is u cud state ur examples in ur introduction(like u say great people like van gogh have shown us power of imagination in ur introduction).also in ur conclusion.. try to resate ur examples.. (like v hav seen in the field of arts and life of mendel and van gogh)..</p>

<p>i guess thats bout it....
im sure ull do very well..</p>

<p>thanks a bunch! :D i always thought thinking of examples would be the greatest problem but now i feel that developing them well will be haredest :/</p>

<p>hey... no problem.. here r a few other tips for the essay:
1)plan ur essay in the beginning.. think bout wt stand ur gonna take n wt examples ur gonna use.. plan for abt 5-10 mins.. u might think it to be a waste of time but it will pay off later..
2)use examples from a variety of field(like one example from science,one from literature , mayb one personal example)
3)dont try to use very high level vocab for the sake of it.. u might just lose points...</p>

<p>OH AND I HAV TO ADD I LOVE UR NAME.. what does it mean?? n how did ya think of it</p>

<p>I thought it up when i was little (Aberine) it means strenght, beauty and charm... well it doesn<code>t mean that in any language.... it</code>s just what i intended when i was inventing it... :D I am happy you like it :D Thanks a lot :D</p>