<p>anybody wanna look at my essay? Just tell me what you think...</p>
<p>sure, pm me</p>
<p>me???????????????</p>
<p>thanks for the input strappleberry, I thought that was the better essay too. But then i sent it to my old college counselor, who used to be an admissions officer at harvey mudd. She hated it..said "it wasn't sincere" and didn't tell anything about "how I think." I dunno...she really knows what she's doing, but I liked that essay. She liked the music one better, but I thought it wouldn't stand out because there are a billion+ music essays...</p>
<p>oo...also, does anybody think I can use both these essays, one as the main one and one as a supplement?</p>
<p>If you would like an adult viewpoint, feel free to PM me. I have been having fun reading essays, so I am getting a sense of what is out there and I think I have a good sense of what resonates.</p>