Essay

<p>Hi, I just finished my essay about joke and explanation. Now little bit confusing, reason is that joke little bit dirty, but at the same time not. Should I change joke or not?</p>

<p>Could you elaborate? What is the joke about; is it sexually inappropriate? I’m all for being bold and risky but you still wouldn’t want to offend any admissions officers.</p>

<p>It depends how you present it. If it makes you look immature, it’s probably not the best choice, but if the innuendo is just sort of a side note and you don’t focus on or pay attention to it in your essay, you might be able to make it work. If it makes you feel better, mine (I did my own prompt) has some sexual content, but it doesn’t involve me and I checked it with a lot of readers and it got the green light :)</p>