Essay

<p>I'd like some help and critique with my essay. I want to make it more...poetic, I suppose.
I hope that someone will be willing to read and critique. Although I will not share my essay with you unless your going to attend college this year. Sorry...I don't want to spread around my essay.</p>

<p>HELP PLEASE.
THANK YOU!!! =)</p>

<p>Sure. I'm a pretty experienced reader who IS going to college this year. PM it!</p>