essay?

<p>Can anyone please critique my essay? diversity and the major essay.
I wasn't planning on doing early till today so I still gotta do some major edits till Sunday :(
Please</p>

<p>I am terrible at writing essays, but if you need help with grammar/spelling, I can help you. I’m class of 2014 but I have already been accepted so you don’t have to worry about your essay getting jacked.</p>

<p>My application is already in…I’ll read</p>