Essay!

<p>I'm finally finished with my essay.. I need some readers!! I need some advice, it's about 1300 words, and I know it seems a little long, and I can shorten it IF it seems to drag on..</p>

<p>No 2010ers, please.</p>

<p>no takers?</p>

<p>bummmmmmpp</p>

<p>Now, I’ve been told the tense change seems confusing?! Anyone wanna read?</p>

<p>Buuump?? I need someone advice!!!</p>