<p>I have one long essay and one short essay for you to tear apart!</p>
<p>Would anyone be willing to be veryveryveryveryvery ultimate critical?</p>
<p>I will be so critical that you will cry. PM me. I'm a nice, polite person, I promise.</p>
<p>Ill be so critical that you will rip the essay to shreds when you finish reading my comments. :p</p>
<p>Just kidding. But I will be critical.</p>
<p>I'll give it a shot, PM me!</p>
<p>Goldfish, I can't send the second part because your PM box is full! haha</p>
<p>send it to me baby...</p>
<p>Hahaha saliksyed</p>
<p>I cleaned it up so you can send it to me now :)</p>
<p>PM me too....</p>
<p>I'll take a look at it and critique it for you.</p>
<p>same here!!</p>
<p>You can PM me.</p>
<p>algun mas? (anyone else?)</p>
<p>i love critiquing stuff, so send it over and I'll see what I can throw back at you</p>
<p>gimme a shout, would ya?
i'll do my best to give you back some feedback</p>
<p>ill read it</p>
<p>i'd love to read it and give some suggestions</p>
<p>i will pm me</p>
<p>i'll help you :-)</p>