Essays, prompt 1 and prompt 2. The more critical you are, the better!

College Essays
1

<p>Hey guys
i really need to make these 2 UC essays good
If you could help my by critiquing it that would be great</p>

<p>My prompt 1 essay is about 300 words
my prompt 2 essay is about 700</p>

<p>I need more help on my prompt 1 than 2, but if you could critique both that would be really awesome</p>

<p>thanks!</p>

<p>no 09-er's please!</p>

2

<p>bump!adfsd</p>

3

<p>I’m willing to read your essays. You can PM me.</p>

4

<p>email: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>

5

<p>Sure I’ll read it.</p>