<p>Hey guys!</p>
<p>Would you mind critiquing my Pomona essay? I would greatly appreciate it. Just reply or PM me, and I'll send it to you.</p>
<p>Thank you very much!</p>
<p>You can send it to me, but I probably won’t get to it until Thursday!</p>
<p>That’s fine. Thank you!</p>
<p>You can send it to me if you like and I’ll give you some advice.</p>
<p>As a warning though: I am applying as well. I would never think of stealing your work, but you don’t exactly know me, so I fully understand if you’re uncomfortable with it.</p>
<p>At any rate, good luck! I hope you (and me) get in.</p>
<p>Sure thing manarius, check your inbox! What are you applying for, RD or EDII?</p>
<p>I’m applying RD. I would love to apply ED, but money is an issue.</p>
<p>I just read your essays. They were both very enjoyable, but I think they could benefit a lot from a bit of fine tuning. I have a few suggestions, which I’ll include in a more detailed critique via PM a little later.</p>
<p>Sweet, thanks a bunch!</p>
<p>Sure bro, I’d be happy to take a look! Like manarius said I would never steal your work, even though I am an applicant as well.</p>
<p>I have a favor to ask as well, one that I hope proves I trust you as much lol. Would you read over my essays too please? I was looking for a reader on here too a week ago. Go ahead and send yours.</p>
<p>Sure thing AA :)</p>
<p>Analysis, I’d love to read your essays! Just shoot me a pm!</p>
<p>I’ll take a look if you want.</p>
<p>I’ll read if you want more opinions :)</p>
<p>I’m a high school senior, but I was accepted ED so no worries.</p>
<p>Thanks so much guys! Anyone else?</p>
<p>I’ll look too if you still need it.</p>
<p>Sure thing KYST, I’m sending them to you right now.</p>
<p>I am happy to take a peek if you’d like. :-)</p>
<p>If you still need help I’ll help.</p>