<p>if you'd like yet another opinion/insight feel free to pm me</p>
<p>ditto quickflood</p>
<p>PM me with yout essay dude and I will critique it.</p>
<p>i'll help you,PM me</p>
<p>me too and i'll try to help you! :D</p>
<p>I'd love to offer any advice that I can! (Though I must warn you that I'm more efficent at catching grammatical/spelling/sentence structure errors, rather than content... but I'll be happy to try nonetheless!)</p>