<p>I was wondering, if some of your sentences are somewhat long and convoluted, or if you used too many "I"'s in the extracurricular activities section (2 I's in a row for each activity, yes I'm being somewhat meticulous about this), would that come across as arrogant?</p>
<p>I know I shouldn't be thinking about an application thats already been submitted, but it still makes me wonder.</p>
<p>I tried not to let too many ppl proofread my app, and I guess my friends and family were all too respectful to say if my tone was weird. Any ideas?</p>