Evaluate my Commonapp Essay?

College Essays
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<p>Will anyone read over my commonapp essay? Just to tweak it for grammer, etc. It would be super helpful because I need to submit soon for early action. Thanks :)</p>

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<p>Sure, send it?</p>

3

<p>I will critique it for you.</p>

4

<p>Thank you guys so much. I’ve sent you my essay in a PM. I’m hoping you’ve received it?</p>

5

<p>I don’t mind giving advice either.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>ok pm me
:)</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it Pm me.</p>