excerpt of my common app essay. reply to thread for more!

College Essays
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<p>In the middle of the editing process....</p>

<p>Last year Mother’s Day fell between my two AP exams. I studied with two friends, one of whom went off about how her mom had been unreasonably irritable that morning. I knew it’d be a while before we’d move on to plant reproduction, so I opened up my notebook to a blank page and decided to write my own mom a letter.
“I barely even know who you are,” I wrote.
She vanished on a spring day in 2006.</p>

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<p>Don’t post your essay in a public forum. btw it sounds good so far; it makes the reader want to continue reading.</p>

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<p>I can give it a read</p>

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<p>mmm sounds interesting :slight_smile: pm me!</p>

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<p>Send here as well.</p>

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<p>thanks a bunch, guys. I really appreciate it.</p>