Experienced Readers Needed for UC Transfer Essays

<p>I consider myself a decent essay writer, but I find introspective writing challenging. I'm hoping to attend one of the better UCs, and, for a number of reasons, I really need to knock the essay out of the park. I started working on them slowly a few months ago, but I can't say I'm particularly happy with what I've produced.</p>

<p>I would appreciate it if one or two experienced, already-enrolled students--or parents, for that matter--would be willing to read my essays and give me advice. Just send a PM if you'd like to take a look.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>Anyone? :-)</p>

<p>(shameless bump)</p>