<p>Please critique my common app personal essay.
Only leave a post if willing to give criticism.</p>
<p>Rip it apart! Tear it away! But just be honest about it.
I promise it won't be a waste of your valuable time. Thanks in advance! :)</p>
<p>Applying to:
Boston University
College of William and Mary
Whitman College
Drexel University
Brown University (as the farthest reach ever possible. haha)</p>
<p>no 2014ers!</p>