<p>I have an essay for Emory that's about a thousand words and really like it, but I really worry whether or not it's just supremely vague or anything like that. It's kind of conceptual and it talks about police officers and Helen Keller and cancer.</p>
<p>If anyone would like to proof read it for me and give me some feedback, I'd be incredibly appreciative, just PM me or reply and I can send it to you.</p>
<p>Thank you for your time!</p>