Hi! I’ve been working on my supplemental essay in response to the prompt, “Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences. (150 word limit)” but I’m really frustrated because I’m not sure if it’s too cliche or lacks a clear voice. I’m not too happy with it but the deadline for most of my schools is 1/1 
If anyone is willing to read it and let me know your opinions about it, I’ll send it to you!
Thanks, I really appreciate it!
Honestly, I would be more concerned about getting it done and hitting submit at this point. If you wait much longer, and hit any sort of a glitch, it could be a real problem.Cliche or not, now is the time to get it done.
They only gave you 150 words because they wanted you to be succinct.
pleasee would anyone be willing to read it? i’ve been stressing out for this whole day about it
I will read it if you want. Expect me to be harder on you than any college admissions officer would; if you can please me, your essay is gold.
Give me more information too please.