Extracurricular Paragraph

<p>I made a common app college extracurricular paragraph on shopping. Is that bad? It wasn't my idea. It was my english teachers idea (from bxscience) I have other extracurriculars like photography but that is kind of intertwined with my college essay so I didn't want to include that in my paragraph. I'd post the whole thing but its confidential. Be nice if someone could help me out. Need help asap
Thank you.</p>

<p>Why did your teacher suggest that?</p>

<p>You called shopping your extracurricular activity? Lol why?</p>

<p>ummmmmm I really, really wouldn’t do it on shopping. just pick another EC!</p>

<p>It’s hard to really judge without knowing what your paragraph talks about. There are tons of ways that shopping could be interpreted badly. What does the paragraph show about you?</p>