EXTREMELY last minute Personal statement reviews.

Transfer Students UC Transfers
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<p>Hey all, I am finally done with my final draft of prompt 1 for my essay.</p>

<p>Can anyone quickly read my essay and give me feedback?</p>

<p>This is my final draft and im running out of time, so im really just looking for comments and any glaring problems that needs to be fixed.</p>

<p>Thanks!!!!! Please post if you would like to read it and I will PM it to you.</p>

<p>Prompt 1 =
What is your intended major? Discuss how your interest in the subject developed and describe any experience you have had in the field — such as volunteer work, internships and employment, participation in student organizations and activities — and what you have gained from your involvement.</p>

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<p>not gonna read ur ps, but I gotta say this. “GOOD GAME.”</p>

3

<p>PM me im bored, bring it on</p>

4

<p>I know it’s a little late of a response, but if you PM me your PS, I’ll revise it for you.</p>

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<p>Hey all thanks for replying!
I dont think there will be enough time at this point so i think im done</p>

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<p>just submit it man. Why do you want to wait until this point???</p>

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<p>to make his personal statements perfect of course! that’s everyone’s reason! Anyways, it really depends on the UCs hes transferring to haha. some don’t read PS.</p>