favorite class essay, need suggestions

Colleges & Universities A-Z Johns Hopkins University
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<p><a href="http://www.ragthree.com/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=1&t=2138&st=0#entry32717%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://www.ragthree.com/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=1&t=2138&st=0#entry32717&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

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<p>wow, your essays amazing. youre a really good writer.</p>

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<p>are you serious? if you want to read more i'll show you becase i'm in deperate need of critiqueing ,</p>

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<p>yeah
im totally serious. youre a REALLY good writer.
sure. pm me</p>

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<p>“You're a good friend Tony, and I think you're really smart. College is about exploring your passions, especially for a guy as smart as you. You have a passion for art that even you don’t quite understand. That passion is driven by your creativity, which in your case, will open up new paths.”</p>

<p>Did he really say that?</p>

<p>(Your writing is good, and the essay is good.)</p>

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<p>ehhehee shhh about the quote</p>

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<p>just telling you that it sounds well... you catch my drift?</p>

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<p>hmm? would it pass if i had a good memeory?</p>

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<p>Just telling you that when I read it, it caught my eye and I wasn't reading too carefully. It might sound fake, and like you wrote the quote for him because you were trying too hard, or I maybe I'm just being cynical. Seek other opinions.</p>

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<p>well other people?</p>

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<p>the link doesn't work for me...</p>

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<p>yea i cant see it either</p>

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<p>haha you guys this post was made over a year ago. also i know that guy personally. he didn't get into jhu and now goes to uva</p>

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<p>o haha i just saw the 12/29 and didnt read past that</p>

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<p>i can't see the site. would u be willing to show me your essay?</p>

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<p>yeah. i want to see the essay. anyone wanna critique my essay? pm me</p>