<p>My AP English teacher loved it, problem is she seemed to think a lot of my friends' were good too. I think she's being way too easy so I need more feedback :( She preferred complete "showing/storytelling" as you can see if you read my essay.... a UC student hated it and told me to include more "This experience affected my dreams in that itaa==....", basically more first-person direct answering of the prompt. I don't know who to trust, they're both credible sources haha... can you guys please offer honest opinions? I can email you or get you my essay somehow if you can help, thank you! By the way, this is UC prompt # 1:</p>
<p>Describe the world you come from for example, your family, community or school and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>
<p>Thank you again!</p>