Feedback for UC essay (heartfelt, genuine)

College Essays
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<p>anyone care to critique my UC essay? its a personal and genuine essay about how my brother has shaped my aspirations. i would really appreciate feedback. thanks a lot</p>

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<p>ill read it!</p>

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<p>thanks grahams, anyone else wanna critique it?</p>

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<p>ill read it too.</p>

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<p>thank you bee09</p>

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<p>ill read
message it over</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read ('09 though but my essays are already written)
just PM me!</p>

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<p>Im in the same situation as beeish.</p>

<p>Happy to read though.</p>

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<p>I’ll read them. I have experience with the UC essay prompts so I might be able to help. Shoot a PM at me!</p>

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<p>thanks, anyone else…i jsut revised it</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll give it a look.</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look at it!</p>

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<p>i’d like to read it. shoot ;)</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look! Message it. :)</p>

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<p>i’ll read it`~</p>

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<p>ill read it as well!</p>

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<p>Sure, I’d love to read it… and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account… but I’d prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href=“mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu”>sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>

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<p>I’ll check it out, send it to me :]</p>

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<p>i just pm’d u!
and id be happy to read it and help out</p>